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PostSubject: I do Songwriting?   Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:54 pm

Hey people, I actually write songs in real life for fun, and I've actually got them rated recently by a friend and I couldn't believe the average score I got.

8.5

It surprised me, so I thought. Why not show everyone here what I write? That is, if you want to see them?
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:48 am

Sure! Why not? Let's see if your friend was really telling his honest opinion...
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Wed Apr 08, 2009 10:26 am

Write a song about ink...you heard me. Suspect
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:50 am

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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:53 pm

ye sure i wanna see it Very Happy ...wat is it about anyway?
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Wed Apr 08, 2009 5:27 pm

Okay since people were wondering what songs I write, I'll let you know, by showing you lot my first ever song.

Demons of my Heart

What can I do?
Against the monster who has you
What can I really do?
Now that I can see my own
Turn their backs on me
Because I couldnít stop you scream in pain!

(Chorus)
Please forgive me
For not saving you
But I couldnít stop the demons
The demons of my heart
That stopped my attempts to stop it
My attempts to stop your pain
Please forgive me
For losing to my demons

I never wanted to see this
Once I walked alone
There I saw you flashing
Before my very mind
Screaming at how you hate me
For not stopping your screaming
As I couldnít stop the pain
Just like that time before
I couldnít my demons
From slamming you to the floor

(Chorus)
Please forgive me
For not saving you
But I couldnít stop the demons
The demons of my heart
That stopped my attempts to stop it
My attempts to stop your pain
Please forgive me
For losing to my demons

Please forgive me
For I can not control it
The angry and the bloodlust
That my demons have unleashed
Upon your broken body
Which I could not protect
Now I have to pretend
That this is just a dream
A dream where demons
Are not free!

(Chorus)
Please forgive me
For not saving you
But I couldnít stop the demons
The demons of my heart
That stopped my attempts to stop it
My attempts to stop your pain
Please forgive me
For losing to my demons

Please stop me killing!
I want to stop this for once!
I donít know why I canít stop this
Why my demons are in control!
Please stop my demons
Before this night ends!
Please just kill me now and then!

(Chorus)
Please forgive me
For not saving you
But I couldnít stop the demons
The demons of my heart
That stopped my attempts to stop it
My attempts to stop your pain
Please forgive me
For losing to my demons
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Fri May 22, 2009 10:44 pm

New song. This one is called "Escaping"

I really need to behave
When I come back from home
Even if I donít want to return
I know that I donít have a chance
Of escaping

What do people tell you?
What have you done here?
I know that I donít deserve this
I only need to have a new life
But I donít have a chance
Of escaping

[Chorus]
I wish that I could change
I never wanted to be this monster
I never wanted to push her away
But now Iím starting to see the truth
That I will never have chance
Of escaping
[End Chorus]

Will you even believe me?
After all that youíre starting to see
But thereís nowhere where you can run
Iíve made sure that thereís no chance
Of escaping

Iíve seen all that I want to see
Iíve seen all that I can believe
But this is something that is crazy!
But I can see something amazing!
And my life wonít have a chance
Of escaping

[Chorus]
I wish that I could change
I never wanted to be this monster
I never wanted to push her away
But now Iím starting to see the truth
That I will never have chance
Of escaping
[End Chorus]

I never wanted these problems
I only wanted a lover
But after my mistake
I blow away my chance of escaping
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Fri May 22, 2009 11:58 pm

Nice un'! It took me a little while to see how a beat could fit in, but it seems pretty good.
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Sat May 23, 2009 5:28 pm

Write a song about a happy zombie, skipping across a rainbow.
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Sat May 30, 2009 12:17 am

Made a new one called

Weakness

I have a shrine in my room
Itís something that Iíve always had
I never wanted to believe
But after all Iíve seen
I wonder where youíve been

There is something youíre hiding
I wish I knew what I could find
Iíve always watched the clouds
Itís something that keeps me calm
I donít want to tell you
About my weakness

[Chorus]
I see all the needles in your skin
And the pain that youíre in
But I turn away everytime I see
You showing your weakness
To me and the world
[End Chorus]

I wonder what I did today
To cause you to cry today
I never truly understand
The way the human mind works
I donít understand the weakness

I donít want to give up
I donít want to give in
I wonder why I want to cry
Why do I think of my pain
When Iím showing my weakness

[Chorus]
I see all the needles in your skin
And the pain that youíre in
But I turn away everytime I see
You showing your weakness
To me and the world
[End Chorus]

There is something that is painful to see
But itís nothing more than a disease
I will never truly understand
What it means to be
Showing your weakness
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Tue Jun 02, 2009 10:01 pm

People I believe I have written a song for our Sunday nights
Check it out

Devastation

Can you see the fires
That are roaring up high
After what we caused
In this painful world
With these dangers

You will see what you need
And that is simple
What you need is fame and glory
And to become the king of the world
After all the destruction
You should know what itís like

[Chorus]
Devastation!
Everyoneís caused it
Pain and destruction!
Everyone feels it
Fame and glory!
Everyone wants it
This is what causes devastation!
[End Chorus]

Winning a match is not enough
Being a champion is something better
We all want to be a champion
Winning a Tag Title causes bonding
We are completely Prestige
And we know it
Winning with Pride is what we need to do
Winning a World Title makes you enemies
And everyone knows it

[Chorus]
Devastation!
Everyoneís caused it
Pain and destruction!
Everyone feels it
Fame and glory!
Everyone wants it
This is what causes devastation!
[End Chorus]

We will want a bit of glory and fame
I know that you will need it
Cause we are part of the Devastation
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Tue Jun 02, 2009 10:10 pm

I like "Weakness" - after reading it some times, it reminds me of some songs of "Three Days Grace" (well, its main content and messages - listen to "Pain" and "It's all Over", maybe...).

I don't have any feeling for rhyme schemes and such, so I cannot say anything about that, but I can say something about the lyric and content - I do write short stories in my free time and already got one published in a book, so I cannot be THAT bad Wink
(sorry, they are in german... Will have to look if I have ever written something in english that you can show to people Smile )
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Wed Jun 03, 2009 2:28 am

I can imagine "Devastation" VERY easily as a metal song!
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Wed Jun 10, 2009 12:03 am

made a new one completely out of the blue yea, so hope you enjoy reading it yea

Messages

Can you hear my voice?
Do you really have a choice?
You donít need to know
The truth in my lies

Iíve always been on msn
You always asked how I am
You donít understand
Just how sick that I truly am
I could easily play with your heart
But thereís no time to depart

Youíve never seen my face
Iíve never seen your voice
You wish you could forget my voice
I wish I could to forget your face

Messages can be dangerous thing
I never open my junk mail
If I ever open my junk mail
I would see your messages
And I just want to forget your face
Itís a disgrace to the human race

I never wanted an attachment
I couldnít see what you believed in
It is something I could never be
And that is a regretful man
Well Iím going to start a band

There is something that you know
Now that I have your attention
I must tell you the truth
That I was never simple
I know more things
Than you could imagine

I never wanted to see you
I could never believe you
There are some things
That are not worth it
So I must finally say goodbye
After all my message is simply this
Life is a complete and utter bitch
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Wed Jun 10, 2009 10:50 pm

My latest song

Inside Her

I always watch her at school
When sheís having fun
But it doesnít really matter
Iím never gonna get my way
Even if I admit my reasons
Cause all Iíve got is my dreams

[Chorus]
Cause I can do whatever I want here
I can make her see my way
And I could taste her lips
And Iím gonna be deep inside her
And itís gonna make her scream
And Iíll just wake up after that dream
[End Chorus]

I always smiled at her at school
When she looked my way
But I knew she didnít care
I was never gonna get my way
Even if I try to explain
After all I only need my dreams

[Chorus]
Cause I can do whatever I want here
I can make her see my way
And I could taste her lips
And Iím gonna be deep inside her
And itís gonna make her scream
And Iíll just wake up after that dream
[End Chorus]

I wish I could see her smile at me
Cause I only see her frown at me
But I know she doesnít even like me
I will never get me way with her
Even if I tried
But all I really need are my dreams

[Chorus]
Cause I can do whatever I want here
I can make her see my way
And I could taste her lips
And Iím gonna be deep inside her
And itís gonna make her scream
And Iíll just wake up after that dream
[End Chorus]
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PostSubject: Re: I do Songwriting?   Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:06 pm

This is a song that I wanted to make for us

My Goodbye

Have you ever wondered why
We have to leave
Are we gonna get the last ride home?
There are some things
That I want to achieve
But I never have enough time

Hey! Wait! I need to say this line!
After all your advice I need to say
Hey! Wait! I need to say this line!
After all their advice I have one thing to say
Hey! Wait! I need to say this line!
I have to say my goodbye
My goodbye

I never wanted this all to end
After all our fun
Weíve been locked inside our little game
I just wish it never had to end
But in the end
It could never truly last

Hey! Wait! I need to say this line!
After all your advice I need to say
Hey! Wait! I need to say this line!
After all their advice I have one thing to say
Hey! Wait! I need to say this line!
I have to say my goodbye
My goodbye

When will we play this game again?
After all the time weíve been made
I just wish I could be here again
So we could start our game again
After all this time
I want to create a new cancer
So we could continue our little game

Hey! Wait! I need to say this line!
After all your advice I need to say
Hey! Wait! I need to say this line!
After all their advice I have one thing to say
Hey! Wait! I need to say this line!
I have to say my goodbye
My goodbye
My goodbye
My goodbye
My goodbye
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